I think I may have dug myself into a hole

[azurite]

It's funny how even when you plan something else, what other people say and think can change your actions. WDKY is planned out in its entirely, but not written completely. Nonetheless, I have an idea of what direction all the plots are going to take, what the characters are going to say, think, and feel, etc... but readers seem to be getting different impressions, and I just want to make sure I don't lead them astray.

The whole Téa fainting thing in Ch. 20 (I don't consider it a spoiler for reasons that follow) was NOT meant to be a significant plot point, or the sign of something bad/dangerous/worrisome on the way. I could twist it to make it like that, but it wouldn't fit with what I've previously set-up points. It could be several things, too, so if it can't fit with one thing, it could be another. People have speculated all sorts of things, and it's got me thinking if I should twist it just a bit, so it doesn't seem STUPID (for Téa fainting for No Big Reason).

On another note, mklutz, do you remember an episode of Full Metal Panic (original series or Fumoffu) where Tessa and Kaname had to fight off some baddies, and one of them grabbed a suitcase or something and NAILED the suckers? Or maybe I'm just remembering the manga? Help!

I have to clean my room. I hate myself for still sitting in front of the computer, even though I'll have to come back to it later for Listening Comprehension.
*snore* Waaah. WDKY21 is another one of those chapters that I think I can get written fast, but I'm dissatisfied just because it's not as action-packed and fun as the others. Sure, part of one plot gets resolved, but 21 is actually about setting up for the rest of the plots. X_X

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[mklutz]

It's been so long I can't remember! ;_; Actually, I think Sosuke was with them almost the entire time because he was so freaked out about Tessa being outside the Dannan, so...?