Even more review replies, taken directly from the page at Darkness Rising. These review replies would have appeared in Chapter 8. I don't include the actual reviews; go to FFnet or MMorg and look at the Review History if you want to see them. If people start reading the fic from the beginning and reviewing for the earlier chapters, I'll update this (and the other) chapter page(s) with replies to them as I see fit.
Also, please remember that since these were taken right from DR, they haven't changed. My opinions might have, so if you want to comment on anything I've said in my older reviews, like the ones here, please do so, and I'll clarify to the best of my abilities.
tekkenite - BEST!? Wow. I mean, wow. *melts*
Josh - Er, whoops? Want I should get you a watch? ^^;; Thank you much for sticking around to read the fic though... I know long ones can get boring... Many many thanks for the reviews and all the compliments! *blush*
Lynderia - Haha, that's one of my problems, reading a fic and then forgetting to check on it for updates! If only every author had update lists... (which I do, hint hint!) Anywho, I am trying to develop Seto and Téa's relationship... but, that which puts so many readers through such angst and suspense (i.e. me keeping them apart) is going to last a litttttttle bit longer. Sorry! ^_^ Thank you much for reviewing again, and I hope to keep entertaining and surprising you!
Mamono - Everyone, this is Mamono. She is an ubertalented artist, and is responsible for all the fanart for WDKY. Do check it out over at my website (Darkness Rising), the Seto/Anzu fanlisting (Blue Eyes and Apricots) and be sure to stop by HER webpage, 'Frozen Rhapsody,' a Kaiba brothers shrine! ^_^
Hi Mamono!! ^_^ Obviously, I adore you for all the time you've put into making me your delicious *snickers, remembering the Kaiba cooking one* fanart! Okay... I know next to nothing about motorcycles, but Kaiba and a Shadow Sabre just seem to *work.* Plus it's got dragons all over it... ^_^ I do read Tarot, and I've had lots of people day I'm uncannily accurate. o_O Maybe my abilities transferred into Bakura for Part 7B? Ohh, and I spent so much time imagining a statuette like Seto's, and MAN, I wish I could have one... I just know it would cost a fortune, and would likely take more than three days to make. ^^;; Oh well, a girl can dream... hehe, besides, as a writer, I have ARTISTIC LICENSE! Bwahaa...
P.S. Many thanks for the free advertising for WDKY and BEA! *huggles* We'll do a sister-site promotional thing, mmkay?
Hioga-chan - Okay, I'm addressing two reviews here, since you reviewed for Part 7A and 7B (though FFnet reads 7B as Part 8). I hope I'm doing a decent job building tension and such, though I know my pacing needs a LOT of work... it's my weak spot, I admit. *blushes* I think the full blown reactions might be a chapter or so off... okay, I admit it, NEXT chapter. ^_^ Is that a spoiler? *snicker* I do try to keep in mind that this *is* a Yu-Gi-Oh fic, and it wouldn't be such if I didn't have Yugi in there somewhere, would it? His is not a huge role, but it's certainly PIVOTAL! =D
As for Chieko, well... I never intended her to be a character that people would either root for or want to ax. She's rather "wooden" in that respect, having served her purpose as a temporary rival for Téa, and then having her act as a force for Téa to get up off her butt and do something about her feelings. Though she's not as forceful as Téa's OTHER friends might be... >_> I don't like OCs who get too involved in the story, becoming romantic interests or best friends of the existing characters. It turns the premise of a good fic into something resembling a Mary-Sue, and frankly, I'd rather puke before reading such a fic. -.-; So Chieko won't ever be a huge character.
Haha, and knowing your English/writing terms is a good thing! Admittedly, I never really liked my English classes (evil teachers, too much work, idiot classmates) but I do love writing and completely abusing all I've learned. ^_^ And you are totally right ("write"); Bakura's tarot reading was foreshadowing. Couldn't you figure it out by this chapter? ^_^; I hope so... I've also "foreshadowed" stuff that's quite far off... *snickers* Like in the SEQUEL! Oops, I let it out... *runs away*
daisycutters - Yep, I make it a point to respond to everyone-- since everyone that's nice enough to review has something worthy to say! Like you--
I mentioned Téa's birthday would be changed from what it is in the series. In the series, I believe her birthday is August 18th.It might be August 8th...? In any case, when she mentioned she was ALMOST born 4 months premature (as in, she wasn't, but she came CLOSE to be) she would have been a Leo (aka her real birthday). However, for the sake of the story, I had to make her younger than Seto, and prolong her time before turning 18. So, she's a Sagittarius, born on December 8th. Clear everything up? Nope, I wasn't irritated by this at all; I was hoping someone would say something in case they were confused. ^_^
Choas Babe - Is it supposed to be 'Chaos?' Just curious... ^^;; At first, I was afraid your review was a flame... I've gotten a few before, so I'm sort of immunized to them, but that doesn't stop them from discouraging me. So thanks for not being a flamer, just a... really enthusiastic reviewer! I hope you've enjoyed these past 2 chapter updates! And I believe you read TJOY too; like I said earlier, it'll be worked on during the holidays, and those that visit my site might be lucky enough to happen upon it on my "random gift fic" page for YGO.
Haha, and as for Chieko, like I said before to Hioga-chan, Chieko is a wooden character. She only has a subtle, almost indirect effect on the story. Nothing she says or does will instigate immediate plot changes or character action. That would be giving her too big of a role, IMHO. So, no beating for her. ^^;; Sorry.
Embient - You must have skimmed over Part 7A, because I'm *positive* I responded to your initial review there. See, I had to split up the reviews I got for Part 6 (and before) into Parts 7A and 7B... so some people got their replies posted in 7A, others had to wait until 7B. o_O But yep, yours is there in 7A. Near the top of the reviews-replies.
Yikes, though, 5 Hours!? Well, FFnet was down for about that long the other day... Uhm, if you or anyone else EVER WANTS TO READ THE FIC ELSEWHERE, or even OFF-LINE, it's available at my website. As far as I know, my domain has never had a downtime. Go check out azurite.incandesce.org and add /amc/yugioh to the end. Darkness Rising hosts all my fics... and I should also have the most current parts up on my updates list soon. Plus, there's a Yu-Gi-Oh fanfic library that I'm a member of... once it gets enough fics *hint hint to the other authors out there* it will be up! It's called The Millennium Library! Go check it out!
I'm trying my hardest to get Téa's personality down... *blush* I'm glad you think I've got it down well, but I'm going to keep doing my research and torturing her like the writer I am. ^_^; Same goes for Seto, so the lovin' might have to wait a few chapters... *bows* Sorry...
pyromaniak - O_O REALLY!? *turns bright red* Thank you so much... *sniffles* I'd like to thank the Academy... *giggles* I really appreciate your incredibly kind reviews. Thank so much for taking the time to review; it really encourages me! Do check out some of the authors on my favorites list; you might like them, too! Especially Mamono and Atlantis2!
kikoken - Haha, you thought the ending from 7B was a cliffhanger? I hate to know what you think of THIS one... *snickers* Man, I love this... ^_^ Too bad there's not EMSiTs (Evil Mad Scientists in Training) for Yu-Gi-Oh, I might get nominated! Maybe I should come up with a special name for "evil" YGO fic writers who are great with cliffhangers... any suggestions (for names or authors who apply)?
*frowns* I love reviews, but I gotta say this... Serenity/Kaiba!? Never in a million years. Not only is she a good 3 years younger than Kaiba (as far as I know), but what everyone says about Kaiba and Serenity actually hooking up in the anime or manga is pure horseradish. Believe me, I know. It never happens. And the mysterious BEWD girl that Seto sees in his visions? Doesn't look like ANY currently-existing female character. And Isis, for those that root for her and Seto... well, she has her OWN past-life incarnation-- the only female member of the Pharaoh's inner circle, and the holder of the (duh) Millennium Torque (necklace)! She seems to have her own MO, at any rate, and doesn't seem to care for Seto much. So... *grins* I prefer this pairing.
The-Unbreakable-Jade - You reviewed my fics, and some of MY favorites authors' fics! You get around! Thank you much for taking the time to review, and I hope I keep impressing you! (Wow is a very powerful word, I've come to learn.)
Teto4eva - Hehe, very cool SN, then! Thanks for the compliments, and for taking the time to review again... hope you've liked this latest chapter!
Tea Fan - AWRIGHT, YOUSE BACK! *snaps out of her Joey-moment* Hehe, good to have you back. Okay, with Yugi/Yami... yeah, I gotta admit, I like to put them through the ringer. But the thing is, as much as Yugi seems to be crushing on Téa (or he was, initially, anyway), I think that his destiny with/as (note: I don't believe in yaoi couplings for YGO) Yami is far greater than that. Plus he doesn't seem to "need" Téa the way Seto does, IMHO. Don't get me wrong, I love to see the guy with Téa every so often, but... the whole split personality thing makes for some WEIRD-ARSE fics. And then trying to pair him with anyone else just seems... wrong. Like you said. As for Ryou competing with/for Téa... o_O Eh? For her, like he WANTS her, or with her, like Téa did with Chieko? I'm confuzled. But yeah, Bakura in leather... *dr00ls*
*smirk* By 7B, it looked like you figured out some of my secrets! Ssh! I don't plan on having Bakura crush on Téa or anything (methinks that would make life with HIS Yami a bit complicated) but he could definitely exist as a plot device (conflict, conflict, conflict!) And as for Mokuba's crush... *shrugs* It's something that I see happening in the dub, anyway. 4Kids admittedly changed Mokuba and Seto's personalities a bit drastically, making Mokuba a hell of a lot more polite than he really is... but I've seen scenes of him interacting with Anzu in the Japanese version, and he actually goes out of his way to be nice to her, and to force Seto to be, too! o_O Just wait, the conflict within "the family" will heighten soon enough (as if it hasn't already, bwahaha!). And yeah, you're right about my preferred side couples... but I really like Duke (for some inexplicable reason) so I'm going to do my best to integrate him in there, too.
Raye - *waves* Hi there! Glad you liked the fic-- and tell your friends so, too! If you/they write Yu-Gi-Oh fics, let me know where I can find them, because I'm always looking for new fics to find!
dragontamer101 - LOL, "dance around their feelings for one another." That's... just too perfect. If you don't get it, blame it on my demented mind. *cough* Anyway. Yeah, reading fics too early in the morning messes with your head. In my case, I have to, or I end up dreaming about work-- which is NEVER a good thing. Hope you liked this latest chapter! ^_^
Atlantis2 - Damn you readers, you're all related to Espa Roba! You especially! Stop seeing through my plot! X_X Kidding. Still more surprises on the way, OBVIOUSLY. Yeah, now that I look back on 7B, the songs were a bit repetitive (and believe you me, describing all their moves was a pain in the neck; I actually choreographed dances). But they served their purpose in drawing character attention, breaking away from scenes, and having emotion. Plus there's a huge plot thingy later on where *gets muffled* Yeah. ^_^ As for the time it took getting out, like I said, 7A and 7B were initially ONE chapter. ONE set of replies to the reviews... and over 375 KB! So I had to break it up, or I couldn't upload it. Technically, 7A had been written for a while (mid-November '03, at least) while 7B still needed a few scenes. I did a final revision and spell-check, and decided to post them within a few days of one another. Seeing you review just makes me giddy, and inspires me to work all the harder! I can't wait for the next chappie of your fic *giggles madly* so I hope you liked mine!
The Female Version of Seto Kiaba - Okay good, now I know I'm not making a spelling error when I reply to your review! ^_^ We need more decent YGO Fic writers, so get your stuff out on the 'Net yo! It's so hard to find well-written YGO Fics these days... *sigh* Thanks for reviewing again, and I hope you like this latest chapter!
Joey Crazed Fangirl - Sssh! Your secret is safe with me! Well, I hope you've enjoyed these last three installments (7A, 7B, and this, Part 8) and will keep reading... ^_^ And if you're really a Joey-crazed fangirl, there's a treat for you coming up! Thanks for reviewing!
Darkness Falls1 - ^_^ Hey, glad you liked the fic. o_O It's odd to hear people say they've taken so long to read the fic... X_X Maybe it's longer than I thought.
Li-chan11 - Hey! If you've gotten this far, I hope you've liked what you've read! (Should I apologize for Chapter 2 being so sad? I tend to get emotional in my writing.) Thanks for review!
Solar Kitty - o_O 3 Days? Should we have a contest here and see who took the longest in reading the past chapter (7A/7B)? o_O Geez... Ah, did you like Yami Bakura in this chapter? True, he didn't dance, but he did play a vital part! ^_^ Whadja think? As you now know, yeah, it is/was Noah... (Noa is his Japanese spelling). Not to spoil the story or anything, but Chieko is NOT a ghost, nor is she related to Noah in any way. ^^;; Sorry... Haha, but the bit in 7B with the birthday presents was a blast to write! I loved all the gifts I came up with... ^_^
Ramyh - Hehe, doin' my best in the suspense department... hopefully I'll keep it building and keep you reading! Mystery is actually a big part of this fic, so keep your eyes peeled for little details! Thanks so much for reviewing, and I hope to hear from you again, soon!
Vixen - Haha, sorry it takes me a while to update... ideas are hard to turn from note-format into prose, and I refuse to acknowledge script-format as fanfiction. ^^; But I'm glad you liked the story! Hehe, enough of the past unearthed for you in this chapter? There may be more 'past' in the 'future' (okay, the queen of bad puns is leaving now)... Anyway, hope you liked this chapter and you keep reading!
Sakura91 - AUGH!! Exams! *runs away* Well, they'll be over soon, right? I'm glad I don't have to take any (yet)... Anyway, thanks for getting as far as you did... I hope you liked this latest installment and might consider checking out some of the other cool Seto/Téa fics here on FFnet! Oh, are goosebumps and chills a good thing? I mean for chapters besides this one... *snickers*
ennovy - Longest? I don't know about the Yu-Gi-Oh fandom, but there's one fic in the Inuyasha-fandom that's over 65 chapters long! I know my chapters tend to vary in length *glances at Stats nervously* but I'm trying to cut down on the eyesore-long chapters. Really, these reviews take a lot of space... Anyway, hope you liked this latest installment!
Yami) White Rain - Okay, I put the close parentheses in now... that is how you write your pen-name, yes? ^^;; I'm not trying to put any one else's fics to shame... I'd love to see yours! I'm always hunting for new Seto/Téa fics to read! Send me a link when it's up!
Aika Ishtar - *salutes* Yes! I hoped you like this chapter and will continue reading! *salutes again*
Lunar Dragon 209 -Sorry about the last chapter being (too?) long-- but the music was necessary. Just be glad 7A and 7B weren't REALLY posted as one chapter, eh? @_O What was with the gibberish at the end of your last review? I do agree with you though... sleep is good... Many a night I've spent awake trying to finish this, without sleep... As for other Seto/Téa fics like this... well, can you point me at some? I know I've read a few, but for the life of me I can't remember them. ^^;;Thank you much for all your compliments; I hope you've enjoyed the story up to this point and will keep reading!
chohp71 (me) - Hehe, hi again 'me!' o_O I really didn't update quickly-- I felt so horrible for waiting 2 months between chapters, and now this one... also a pain to get out! ^^;; No vacation for the fic writers though, it seems! ^_^ Anywho, more cliffhangers, because I'm getting good at it... hehee...
It was nice getting an email review for once, I remember I used to get them all the time... *feels nostalgic* Man, those were the days. Ugh, now I feel old. Anyway, glad you like the fic-- I'm trying to find some great Téa-centric fics myself, so if you stumble on any really good, well-written ones, drop me a line so I can read them too! I hope you liked this latest installment and keep reading!
Azurite_Fan - *blushes* Wow, I've never had anyone so openly state they're a fan... ^_^ That's so cool... The ending isn't exactly nigh yet, but I have no plans to make it a depressing ending. And it will be Seto/Téa-- why else would I be hinting at that romance? Just know that they're going to go through heck trying to be together. ^_^ And as far as I can see, all my future Yu-Gi-Oh fics are Seto/Téa centric. YAY!
Kawaii Celestial Star/Akiko - Sorry it took me so enormously long to update... >_< Well, now you know the answer to your question, and then some! I hope you enjoyed this latest chapter, and will continue reading... Thank you much for the compliments, and send me links to other great Seto/Téa fics! I wanna find 'em!
michi-chan - Hehe, hope you've made it this far without any sibling rivalry for the computer... *waves* Glad you like the fic so far and will continue to read!
dragonking - o_O I WISH that Seto and Téa could get together in the show... but with the way Takahashi-sensei keeps hinting at Yami Yuugi and Anzu... I know I just switched languages there, but you know what I mean. Still, it would be great for even MORE rivalry between the two, neh? I am, as I always say, doing my best to keep the characters IN CHARACTER, and with Chieko, she's a very wooden OC, one that is really a plot device and not so much of a character. But for all the gruesome (okay, exaggerating) details on her and others, there's my exclusive WDKY page on my website... ^_^ Hehe, I hope you've enjoyed thus far, even though it takes me forever to update! *bows* Sorry!
Tamereth - Eh, I'm sure this wasn't out as "soon" as you'd hoped. Truth is, these later chapters are quite difficult to get out. Originally, I was inspired for a few select scenes, and while I do have future chapters in mind, they've never been as well-developed as the earlier ones. Which is why I'm going to start making revisions. As for length, well... I guess that's both a good thing and a bad thing. I don't tell myself, "Write ten pages," I say, "Okay, write the scenes the way you imagined them." Getting all the dialogue and descriptions out is hard, so that translates to more scenes. That and these reviews take up a LOT of space.
deity of death1 - Well, the contest ended a while back, and if you've since caught up, I'm sure you know the correct answers. Miss Misao wasn't based on anyone from Kenshin though, she's based on a character from Miwa Ueda's "Peach Girl" manga. I'm going to try to update TJOY as soon as possible... and if you'd like to see any piccies of Téa in her formal wear, I should have the fanart I drew for it scanned and up at my official WDKY page soon!
ElysianKiss - Hehe, glad you liked the last chapter; I hope this one met with your approval as well, and that you'll keep on reading and reviewing! ^_^
LadySilverDragon2 - I id update... a month ago. Now I'm back again, and I hope you've enjoyed his latest installment... I hope this chapter meets with 'GREAT!' reviewable approval again. I dunno, you tell me.
akono (ak47) - Thanks for your compliments! I know it takes me a while to update, but... >_> I don't always have time to write, let alone inspiration for every last paragraph. It's hard, but I try! Hope you'll keep reading!
faded-illusion - Hehe... well, sorry, but the 'competition' didn't last long. :P Don't worry, it's not the last you'll see of competition-- for either Seto or Téa! *grin* I hope you enjoyed this latest chapter, and will keep reading!
punkpresbyterian - You have one of the coolest pennames ever! ^_^ I'm glad you like the fic and hope you'll keep reading!
Saiya-jin Spice - o_O The only fic? You should go read Atlantis2's stuff, now! ^_^; (She oughta hire me as her PR manager, but then, I do this for free without her knowing, so...) Her fics are a lot steamier, but so well written! ^^; Someday I hope to achieve that kind of "EEEEE!" quality from my readers. One can hope, eh?
Anyway, I'm really glad you like WDKY-- I know the pains of trying to find a truly good fic! Matter of fact, I've started what I call "Project: Good Fic" (Fic project with a lame title, I know), where I use FFnet's filters and my preference for Seto/Téa fics to find the best fics amongst the "mess" here at FFnet. So far, out of 2000 hits, I have 9 fics (not including my favorites from Mamono and Atlantis). Yowza.
By the way, I'm a super-sucker for compliments -- they totally give me reason to keep writing. So suck up all you want, it'll just make me happier. I especially appreciate realizing that, while I do take a long time to update, I put a lot of effort into making sure the spelling and grammar are correct, facts are double-checked, and the story "flows." These are the kind of things *I* look for in good fiction, so it's only right that I try and write in the manner that I love reading. Realism is also a major point in here; one of the major reasons I started writing YGO fics was because I hated seeing so many Anzu/Téa-bashing fics. People stating they bash her like they're proud of it is so immature-- she's an incredible character, and just because people don't like her dub character, they use that as an excuse to butcher her! I too, relate to Téa; in this fic especially, I think I can relate to her feelings after the death of her parents. :P That's a very long, drawn-out story right there, and this reply is already getting pretty long...
THANK YOU! A million times! ^_^
tea/anzufan - Not sure if you're the same Tea Fan from up there *points up several paragraphs* but on the off-chance that you're NOT-- I'm flattered. I know that Seto/Téa probably seems horrendously implausible to lots of people, but you don't hear them complaining about Yugi and Yami getting together, do you? ^.~ What I'm trying to accomplish in WDKY is a sense of reality-- that YES, in the YGO-verse, THIS COULD HAPPEN... (if I suddenly took over Kazuki Takahashi's body and instilled YGO with a shoujo-vibe...) Hehe. As for finishing it, have no doubt, I will. In time. I expect the fic to be 20 chapters long, so it might be a while... I'm glad you love the fic so much, and that this latest chapter meets with your approval!
Saiouri - Yeah, this is the real chapter 8. I had to split up part 7 into two chapters because it was over 300KB. I hope you've gotten to this point and still enjoyed the fic... Please keep reading!
Elf3748 - ^^;; I'm evil and I know it. No, really. I purposefully plan my chapters to end on evil cliffhangers... I think this one was the best of all. Agree or disagree? I do hope you've kept reading and will let me know how you've liked this latest chapter. Oh, *laughs* and what I love about most shoujo animes/mangas, and would LOVE to see incorporated more into YGO is the "Love Polygon" concept. Hence, WDKY. I don't stretch the competition out as much, since I've pretty much said from the beginning that this is a Seto/Téa fic, but... getting there is half the fun. So keep reading.
Inspirationwriter - I hope you've gotten up to this chapter and enjoyed it up to this point! I'm glad you liked the story and will keep reading!
Ana - *gigantic hugs* Welcome back into the fold! If you like WDKY, there's several great Téa/Seto fics that I can point you at-- and I myself, am on the hunt for more! So if you know of any old favorites, point me at 'em! "Blue Eyes and Apricots," the web's first Seto/Téa fanlisting is now up! If you so desire, you can join and proclaim your love for Seto/Téa to the world! Whoo-hoo! I hope that this chapter didn't sway your belief in Seto and Téa any (even though I made Seto kind of a jerk, but...)
rlenavampyre14 - This fic is what I'd call 'hodgepodge,' overall. It started out pretty angsty (which always baffles me, I never thought I could write angst that well) and the romance shows up every now and then... spruce it up with some humor... once I get into the dueling bits, we'll have a rounded Yu-Gi-Oh fic! Believe you me, there'll be a bit of everything in here-- so I hope it suits your every mood! I hope you keep reading!
Jellybob 15 - Jellybob, now available in grape! *giggles* Sorry, couldn't help myself. Those who read Shounen Jump will get that cheesy joke, but otherwise, pay it no mind, I'm a crazy writer. I'm really glad you liked the fic, and hope this latest installment met with your satisfaction! Thank you so much for the compliments, they really encourage me to keep going! ^_^ *bows* Hehe, and if you think there's a lot going on now... *whistles* I've slated this fic to be something like 36 chapters, and that's NOT including the sequel. We're in for one heck of a ride!
Chaos Valkyrie - Hello to one of the first five BEA members! Firstly, thank you very much for your uberkind review-- I work very hard to keep the characters in-character (well, as much as possible, anyway) and keep their interactions as believable as... well, as believable as Yu-Gi-Oh. This chapter might have sent the previous chapters off kilter some, but we all know the YGO verse is far from normal. *bows* I hope you liked this latest chapter, and will keep reading!
Emrysrei - *blushes* Thank you very much for the high praise! Though I have to tell you, Bakura's tarot reading was only the tip of the iceberg-- for this chapter! I'm not sure if I'll have him do future readings (for others?) but the plot will go on-- much longer, as I said to Jellybob 15 up there. I really do hope the fic is far from run-of-the-mill; so many fics are just carbon copies of one-another (plot-wise, anyway) that it's difficult to sort through the dirt to find the gems, you know what I mean? Oh, and as for Chieko's fiancee... hehe, he'll come in later. Much later. As you know by now, it's certainly not Noah... *grins*
Pink and White Snow - O_O 2h:35m:40s ...? Geez, and *I'm* starting to think THIS chapter is long. Then again, it's not that much shorter than 7B, but that might be because of the reviews. *shrugs* I hope it doesn't suck away at your free time too much! I do hope you continue to read and review, in any case-- hoped you liked this chappie!
crytadon - This chapter was SOOO hard to write, hence the long wait. Also, I have work, annoying college applications, and I was trying to get BEA up. But now most of that is said and done (except for the work part, *sigh*) so... WDKY TIME! Anyway, thanks for the compliment, and I hope you keep reading and reviewing!
Angel of Midnight Darkness - ^^; I remember when I used to try and print fics out and read them off-line... what a pain! I abused so many printers... Sorry you couldn't print it out, anyhow. I know the chapters are long. Well, if worse comes to worse, you CAN download them off my site and read them off-line on your computer? I hope the fic keeps going on your "better and better" track, and that you liked this latest chapter!
AG the Master - Hey, thanks for the compliments! If my calculations are correct, you should be seeing an official "get-together" of Téa and Kaiba in.... Oops, wait, classified information. :) Keep reading and you'll see!
Mokuba's Official Glomper - Mokuba is the cutest guy EVER! Well, in the anime, anyway. Even when he's trying so hard to be like Seto (i.e. a prick) he's tooo adorable! No wonder why Téa thanked him and not Seto when Seto saved her life. *snickers* What was it someone said-- like thanking the postman that handed you a million dollar check, instead of the guy that sent it to you? Like that. *smirk* I hope you've liked thus far and will keep reading-- Mokuba's spotlight is on in Chapter 12.
Michelle - ^_^ Thanks for the email review! FFnet has been having upgrade situations lately, hence the not-being-able to review, but thanks for taking the time to tell me what you thought! I'm very flattered that you like WDKY so much... as for 'poor Yugi,' well... >_> Gee, I hope you don't hate me for the next chapter then. All I'm going to say is *coughcough*unrequitedlove*coughcough*. As for more Seto/Téa fics, more are on the way, including Part 2 of TJOY! So keep your eyes peeled for them-- check my profile, join my updates list, or keep checking the Yu-Gi-Oh section!
Also, please remember that since these were taken right from DR, they haven't changed. My opinions might have, so if you want to comment on anything I've said in my older reviews, like the ones here, please do so, and I'll clarify to the best of my abilities.
tekkenite - BEST!? Wow. I mean, wow. *melts*
Josh - Er, whoops? Want I should get you a watch? ^^;; Thank you much for sticking around to read the fic though... I know long ones can get boring... Many many thanks for the reviews and all the compliments! *blush*
Lynderia - Haha, that's one of my problems, reading a fic and then forgetting to check on it for updates! If only every author had update lists... (which I do, hint hint!) Anywho, I am trying to develop Seto and Téa's relationship... but, that which puts so many readers through such angst and suspense (i.e. me keeping them apart) is going to last a litttttttle bit longer. Sorry! ^_^ Thank you much for reviewing again, and I hope to keep entertaining and surprising you!
Mamono - Everyone, this is Mamono. She is an ubertalented artist, and is responsible for all the fanart for WDKY. Do check it out over at my website (Darkness Rising), the Seto/Anzu fanlisting (Blue Eyes and Apricots) and be sure to stop by HER webpage, 'Frozen Rhapsody,' a Kaiba brothers shrine! ^_^
Hi Mamono!! ^_^ Obviously, I adore you for all the time you've put into making me your delicious *snickers, remembering the Kaiba cooking one* fanart! Okay... I know next to nothing about motorcycles, but Kaiba and a Shadow Sabre just seem to *work.* Plus it's got dragons all over it... ^_^ I do read Tarot, and I've had lots of people day I'm uncannily accurate. o_O Maybe my abilities transferred into Bakura for Part 7B? Ohh, and I spent so much time imagining a statuette like Seto's, and MAN, I wish I could have one... I just know it would cost a fortune, and would likely take more than three days to make. ^^;; Oh well, a girl can dream... hehe, besides, as a writer, I have ARTISTIC LICENSE! Bwahaa...
P.S. Many thanks for the free advertising for WDKY and BEA! *huggles* We'll do a sister-site promotional thing, mmkay?
Hioga-chan - Okay, I'm addressing two reviews here, since you reviewed for Part 7A and 7B (though FFnet reads 7B as Part 8). I hope I'm doing a decent job building tension and such, though I know my pacing needs a LOT of work... it's my weak spot, I admit. *blushes* I think the full blown reactions might be a chapter or so off... okay, I admit it, NEXT chapter. ^_^ Is that a spoiler? *snicker* I do try to keep in mind that this *is* a Yu-Gi-Oh fic, and it wouldn't be such if I didn't have Yugi in there somewhere, would it? His is not a huge role, but it's certainly PIVOTAL! =D
As for Chieko, well... I never intended her to be a character that people would either root for or want to ax. She's rather "wooden" in that respect, having served her purpose as a temporary rival for Téa, and then having her act as a force for Téa to get up off her butt and do something about her feelings. Though she's not as forceful as Téa's OTHER friends might be... >_> I don't like OCs who get too involved in the story, becoming romantic interests or best friends of the existing characters. It turns the premise of a good fic into something resembling a Mary-Sue, and frankly, I'd rather puke before reading such a fic. -.-; So Chieko won't ever be a huge character.
Haha, and knowing your English/writing terms is a good thing! Admittedly, I never really liked my English classes (evil teachers, too much work, idiot classmates) but I do love writing and completely abusing all I've learned. ^_^ And you are totally right ("write"); Bakura's tarot reading was foreshadowing. Couldn't you figure it out by this chapter? ^_^; I hope so... I've also "foreshadowed" stuff that's quite far off... *snickers* Like in the SEQUEL! Oops, I let it out... *runs away*
daisycutters - Yep, I make it a point to respond to everyone-- since everyone that's nice enough to review has something worthy to say! Like you--
I mentioned Téa's birthday would be changed from what it is in the series. In the series, I believe her birthday is August 18th.
Choas Babe - Is it supposed to be 'Chaos?' Just curious... ^^;; At first, I was afraid your review was a flame... I've gotten a few before, so I'm sort of immunized to them, but that doesn't stop them from discouraging me. So thanks for not being a flamer, just a... really enthusiastic reviewer! I hope you've enjoyed these past 2 chapter updates! And I believe you read TJOY too; like I said earlier, it'll be worked on during the holidays, and those that visit my site might be lucky enough to happen upon it on my "random gift fic" page for YGO.
Haha, and as for Chieko, like I said before to Hioga-chan, Chieko is a wooden character. She only has a subtle, almost indirect effect on the story. Nothing she says or does will instigate immediate plot changes or character action. That would be giving her too big of a role, IMHO. So, no beating for her. ^^;; Sorry.
Embient - You must have skimmed over Part 7A, because I'm *positive* I responded to your initial review there. See, I had to split up the reviews I got for Part 6 (and before) into Parts 7A and 7B... so some people got their replies posted in 7A, others had to wait until 7B. o_O But yep, yours is there in 7A. Near the top of the reviews-replies.
Yikes, though, 5 Hours!? Well, FFnet was down for about that long the other day... Uhm, if you or anyone else EVER WANTS TO READ THE FIC ELSEWHERE, or even OFF-LINE, it's available at my website. As far as I know, my domain has never had a downtime. Go check out azurite.incandesce.org and add /amc/yugioh to the end. Darkness Rising hosts all my fics... and I should also have the most current parts up on my updates list soon. Plus, there's a Yu-Gi-Oh fanfic library that I'm a member of... once it gets enough fics *hint hint to the other authors out there* it will be up! It's called The Millennium Library! Go check it out!
I'm trying my hardest to get Téa's personality down... *blush* I'm glad you think I've got it down well, but I'm going to keep doing my research and torturing her like the writer I am. ^_^; Same goes for Seto, so the lovin' might have to wait a few chapters... *bows* Sorry...
pyromaniak - O_O REALLY!? *turns bright red* Thank you so much... *sniffles* I'd like to thank the Academy... *giggles* I really appreciate your incredibly kind reviews. Thank so much for taking the time to review; it really encourages me! Do check out some of the authors on my favorites list; you might like them, too! Especially Mamono and Atlantis2!
kikoken - Haha, you thought the ending from 7B was a cliffhanger? I hate to know what you think of THIS one... *snickers* Man, I love this... ^_^ Too bad there's not EMSiTs (Evil Mad Scientists in Training) for Yu-Gi-Oh, I might get nominated! Maybe I should come up with a special name for "evil" YGO fic writers who are great with cliffhangers... any suggestions (for names or authors who apply)?
*frowns* I love reviews, but I gotta say this... Serenity/Kaiba!? Never in a million years. Not only is she a good 3 years younger than Kaiba (as far as I know), but what everyone says about Kaiba and Serenity actually hooking up in the anime or manga is pure horseradish. Believe me, I know. It never happens. And the mysterious BEWD girl that Seto sees in his visions? Doesn't look like ANY currently-existing female character. And Isis, for those that root for her and Seto... well, she has her OWN past-life incarnation-- the only female member of the Pharaoh's inner circle, and the holder of the (duh) Millennium Torque (necklace)! She seems to have her own MO, at any rate, and doesn't seem to care for Seto much. So... *grins* I prefer this pairing.
The-Unbreakable-Jade - You reviewed my fics, and some of MY favorites authors' fics! You get around! Thank you much for taking the time to review, and I hope I keep impressing you! (Wow is a very powerful word, I've come to learn.)
Teto4eva - Hehe, very cool SN, then! Thanks for the compliments, and for taking the time to review again... hope you've liked this latest chapter!
Tea Fan - AWRIGHT, YOUSE BACK! *snaps out of her Joey-moment* Hehe, good to have you back. Okay, with Yugi/Yami... yeah, I gotta admit, I like to put them through the ringer. But the thing is, as much as Yugi seems to be crushing on Téa (or he was, initially, anyway), I think that his destiny with/as (note: I don't believe in yaoi couplings for YGO) Yami is far greater than that. Plus he doesn't seem to "need" Téa the way Seto does, IMHO. Don't get me wrong, I love to see the guy with Téa every so often, but... the whole split personality thing makes for some WEIRD-ARSE fics. And then trying to pair him with anyone else just seems... wrong. Like you said. As for Ryou competing with/for Téa... o_O Eh? For her, like he WANTS her, or with her, like Téa did with Chieko? I'm confuzled. But yeah, Bakura in leather... *dr00ls*
*smirk* By 7B, it looked like you figured out some of my secrets! Ssh! I don't plan on having Bakura crush on Téa or anything (methinks that would make life with HIS Yami a bit complicated) but he could definitely exist as a plot device (conflict, conflict, conflict!) And as for Mokuba's crush... *shrugs* It's something that I see happening in the dub, anyway. 4Kids admittedly changed Mokuba and Seto's personalities a bit drastically, making Mokuba a hell of a lot more polite than he really is... but I've seen scenes of him interacting with Anzu in the Japanese version, and he actually goes out of his way to be nice to her, and to force Seto to be, too! o_O Just wait, the conflict within "the family" will heighten soon enough (as if it hasn't already, bwahaha!). And yeah, you're right about my preferred side couples... but I really like Duke (for some inexplicable reason) so I'm going to do my best to integrate him in there, too.
Raye - *waves* Hi there! Glad you liked the fic-- and tell your friends so, too! If you/they write Yu-Gi-Oh fics, let me know where I can find them, because I'm always looking for new fics to find!
dragontamer101 - LOL, "dance around their feelings for one another." That's... just too perfect. If you don't get it, blame it on my demented mind. *cough* Anyway. Yeah, reading fics too early in the morning messes with your head. In my case, I have to, or I end up dreaming about work-- which is NEVER a good thing. Hope you liked this latest chapter! ^_^
Atlantis2 - Damn you readers, you're all related to Espa Roba! You especially! Stop seeing through my plot! X_X Kidding. Still more surprises on the way, OBVIOUSLY. Yeah, now that I look back on 7B, the songs were a bit repetitive (and believe you me, describing all their moves was a pain in the neck; I actually choreographed dances). But they served their purpose in drawing character attention, breaking away from scenes, and having emotion. Plus there's a huge plot thingy later on where *gets muffled* Yeah. ^_^ As for the time it took getting out, like I said, 7A and 7B were initially ONE chapter. ONE set of replies to the reviews... and over 375 KB! So I had to break it up, or I couldn't upload it. Technically, 7A had been written for a while (mid-November '03, at least) while 7B still needed a few scenes. I did a final revision and spell-check, and decided to post them within a few days of one another. Seeing you review just makes me giddy, and inspires me to work all the harder! I can't wait for the next chappie of your fic *giggles madly* so I hope you liked mine!
The Female Version of Seto Kiaba - Okay good, now I know I'm not making a spelling error when I reply to your review! ^_^ We need more decent YGO Fic writers, so get your stuff out on the 'Net yo! It's so hard to find well-written YGO Fics these days... *sigh* Thanks for reviewing again, and I hope you like this latest chapter!
Joey Crazed Fangirl - Sssh! Your secret is safe with me! Well, I hope you've enjoyed these last three installments (7A, 7B, and this, Part 8) and will keep reading... ^_^ And if you're really a Joey-crazed fangirl, there's a treat for you coming up! Thanks for reviewing!
Darkness Falls1 - ^_^ Hey, glad you liked the fic. o_O It's odd to hear people say they've taken so long to read the fic... X_X Maybe it's longer than I thought.
Li-chan11 - Hey! If you've gotten this far, I hope you've liked what you've read! (Should I apologize for Chapter 2 being so sad? I tend to get emotional in my writing.) Thanks for review!
Solar Kitty - o_O 3 Days? Should we have a contest here and see who took the longest in reading the past chapter (7A/7B)? o_O Geez... Ah, did you like Yami Bakura in this chapter? True, he didn't dance, but he did play a vital part! ^_^ Whadja think? As you now know, yeah, it is/was Noah... (Noa is his Japanese spelling). Not to spoil the story or anything, but Chieko is NOT a ghost, nor is she related to Noah in any way. ^^;; Sorry... Haha, but the bit in 7B with the birthday presents was a blast to write! I loved all the gifts I came up with... ^_^
Ramyh - Hehe, doin' my best in the suspense department... hopefully I'll keep it building and keep you reading! Mystery is actually a big part of this fic, so keep your eyes peeled for little details! Thanks so much for reviewing, and I hope to hear from you again, soon!
Vixen - Haha, sorry it takes me a while to update... ideas are hard to turn from note-format into prose, and I refuse to acknowledge script-format as fanfiction. ^^; But I'm glad you liked the story! Hehe, enough of the past unearthed for you in this chapter? There may be more 'past' in the 'future' (okay, the queen of bad puns is leaving now)... Anyway, hope you liked this chapter and you keep reading!
Sakura91 - AUGH!! Exams! *runs away* Well, they'll be over soon, right? I'm glad I don't have to take any (yet)... Anyway, thanks for getting as far as you did... I hope you liked this latest installment and might consider checking out some of the other cool Seto/Téa fics here on FFnet! Oh, are goosebumps and chills a good thing? I mean for chapters besides this one... *snickers*
ennovy - Longest? I don't know about the Yu-Gi-Oh fandom, but there's one fic in the Inuyasha-fandom that's over 65 chapters long! I know my chapters tend to vary in length *glances at Stats nervously* but I'm trying to cut down on the eyesore-long chapters. Really, these reviews take a lot of space... Anyway, hope you liked this latest installment!
Yami) White Rain - Okay, I put the close parentheses in now... that is how you write your pen-name, yes? ^^;; I'm not trying to put any one else's fics to shame... I'd love to see yours! I'm always hunting for new Seto/Téa fics to read! Send me a link when it's up!
Aika Ishtar - *salutes* Yes! I hoped you like this chapter and will continue reading! *salutes again*
Lunar Dragon 209 -Sorry about the last chapter being (too?) long-- but the music was necessary. Just be glad 7A and 7B weren't REALLY posted as one chapter, eh? @_O What was with the gibberish at the end of your last review? I do agree with you though... sleep is good... Many a night I've spent awake trying to finish this, without sleep... As for other Seto/Téa fics like this... well, can you point me at some? I know I've read a few, but for the life of me I can't remember them. ^^;;Thank you much for all your compliments; I hope you've enjoyed the story up to this point and will keep reading!
chohp71 (me) - Hehe, hi again 'me!' o_O I really didn't update quickly-- I felt so horrible for waiting 2 months between chapters, and now this one... also a pain to get out! ^^;; No vacation for the fic writers though, it seems! ^_^ Anywho, more cliffhangers, because I'm getting good at it... hehee...
It was nice getting an email review for once, I remember I used to get them all the time... *feels nostalgic* Man, those were the days. Ugh, now I feel old. Anyway, glad you like the fic-- I'm trying to find some great Téa-centric fics myself, so if you stumble on any really good, well-written ones, drop me a line so I can read them too! I hope you liked this latest installment and keep reading!
Azurite_Fan - *blushes* Wow, I've never had anyone so openly state they're a fan... ^_^ That's so cool... The ending isn't exactly nigh yet, but I have no plans to make it a depressing ending. And it will be Seto/Téa-- why else would I be hinting at that romance? Just know that they're going to go through heck trying to be together. ^_^ And as far as I can see, all my future Yu-Gi-Oh fics are Seto/Téa centric. YAY!
Kawaii Celestial Star/Akiko - Sorry it took me so enormously long to update... >_< Well, now you know the answer to your question, and then some! I hope you enjoyed this latest chapter, and will continue reading... Thank you much for the compliments, and send me links to other great Seto/Téa fics! I wanna find 'em!
michi-chan - Hehe, hope you've made it this far without any sibling rivalry for the computer... *waves* Glad you like the fic so far and will continue to read!
dragonking - o_O I WISH that Seto and Téa could get together in the show... but with the way Takahashi-sensei keeps hinting at Yami Yuugi and Anzu... I know I just switched languages there, but you know what I mean. Still, it would be great for even MORE rivalry between the two, neh? I am, as I always say, doing my best to keep the characters IN CHARACTER, and with Chieko, she's a very wooden OC, one that is really a plot device and not so much of a character. But for all the gruesome (okay, exaggerating) details on her and others, there's my exclusive WDKY page on my website... ^_^ Hehe, I hope you've enjoyed thus far, even though it takes me forever to update! *bows* Sorry!
Tamereth - Eh, I'm sure this wasn't out as "soon" as you'd hoped. Truth is, these later chapters are quite difficult to get out. Originally, I was inspired for a few select scenes, and while I do have future chapters in mind, they've never been as well-developed as the earlier ones. Which is why I'm going to start making revisions. As for length, well... I guess that's both a good thing and a bad thing. I don't tell myself, "Write ten pages," I say, "Okay, write the scenes the way you imagined them." Getting all the dialogue and descriptions out is hard, so that translates to more scenes. That and these reviews take up a LOT of space.
deity of death1 - Well, the contest ended a while back, and if you've since caught up, I'm sure you know the correct answers. Miss Misao wasn't based on anyone from Kenshin though, she's based on a character from Miwa Ueda's "Peach Girl" manga. I'm going to try to update TJOY as soon as possible... and if you'd like to see any piccies of Téa in her formal wear, I should have the fanart I drew for it scanned and up at my official WDKY page soon!
ElysianKiss - Hehe, glad you liked the last chapter; I hope this one met with your approval as well, and that you'll keep on reading and reviewing! ^_^
LadySilverDragon2 - I id update... a month ago. Now I'm back again, and I hope you've enjoyed his latest installment... I hope this chapter meets with 'GREAT!' reviewable approval again. I dunno, you tell me.
akono (ak47) - Thanks for your compliments! I know it takes me a while to update, but... >_> I don't always have time to write, let alone inspiration for every last paragraph. It's hard, but I try! Hope you'll keep reading!
faded-illusion - Hehe... well, sorry, but the 'competition' didn't last long. :P Don't worry, it's not the last you'll see of competition-- for either Seto or Téa! *grin* I hope you enjoyed this latest chapter, and will keep reading!
punkpresbyterian - You have one of the coolest pennames ever! ^_^ I'm glad you like the fic and hope you'll keep reading!
Saiya-jin Spice - o_O The only fic? You should go read Atlantis2's stuff, now! ^_^; (She oughta hire me as her PR manager, but then, I do this for free without her knowing, so...) Her fics are a lot steamier, but so well written! ^^; Someday I hope to achieve that kind of "EEEEE!" quality from my readers. One can hope, eh?
Anyway, I'm really glad you like WDKY-- I know the pains of trying to find a truly good fic! Matter of fact, I've started what I call "Project: Good Fic" (Fic project with a lame title, I know), where I use FFnet's filters and my preference for Seto/Téa fics to find the best fics amongst the "mess" here at FFnet. So far, out of 2000 hits, I have 9 fics (not including my favorites from Mamono and Atlantis). Yowza.
By the way, I'm a super-sucker for compliments -- they totally give me reason to keep writing. So suck up all you want, it'll just make me happier. I especially appreciate realizing that, while I do take a long time to update, I put a lot of effort into making sure the spelling and grammar are correct, facts are double-checked, and the story "flows." These are the kind of things *I* look for in good fiction, so it's only right that I try and write in the manner that I love reading. Realism is also a major point in here; one of the major reasons I started writing YGO fics was because I hated seeing so many Anzu/Téa-bashing fics. People stating they bash her like they're proud of it is so immature-- she's an incredible character, and just because people don't like her dub character, they use that as an excuse to butcher her! I too, relate to Téa; in this fic especially, I think I can relate to her feelings after the death of her parents. :P That's a very long, drawn-out story right there, and this reply is already getting pretty long...
THANK YOU! A million times! ^_^
tea/anzufan - Not sure if you're the same Tea Fan from up there *points up several paragraphs* but on the off-chance that you're NOT-- I'm flattered. I know that Seto/Téa probably seems horrendously implausible to lots of people, but you don't hear them complaining about Yugi and Yami getting together, do you? ^.~ What I'm trying to accomplish in WDKY is a sense of reality-- that YES, in the YGO-verse, THIS COULD HAPPEN... (if I suddenly took over Kazuki Takahashi's body and instilled YGO with a shoujo-vibe...) Hehe. As for finishing it, have no doubt, I will. In time. I expect the fic to be 20 chapters long, so it might be a while... I'm glad you love the fic so much, and that this latest chapter meets with your approval!
Saiouri - Yeah, this is the real chapter 8. I had to split up part 7 into two chapters because it was over 300KB. I hope you've gotten to this point and still enjoyed the fic... Please keep reading!
Elf3748 - ^^;; I'm evil and I know it. No, really. I purposefully plan my chapters to end on evil cliffhangers... I think this one was the best of all. Agree or disagree? I do hope you've kept reading and will let me know how you've liked this latest chapter. Oh, *laughs* and what I love about most shoujo animes/mangas, and would LOVE to see incorporated more into YGO is the "Love Polygon" concept. Hence, WDKY. I don't stretch the competition out as much, since I've pretty much said from the beginning that this is a Seto/Téa fic, but... getting there is half the fun. So keep reading.
Inspirationwriter - I hope you've gotten up to this chapter and enjoyed it up to this point! I'm glad you liked the story and will keep reading!
Ana - *gigantic hugs* Welcome back into the fold! If you like WDKY, there's several great Téa/Seto fics that I can point you at-- and I myself, am on the hunt for more! So if you know of any old favorites, point me at 'em! "Blue Eyes and Apricots," the web's first Seto/Téa fanlisting is now up! If you so desire, you can join and proclaim your love for Seto/Téa to the world! Whoo-hoo! I hope that this chapter didn't sway your belief in Seto and Téa any (even though I made Seto kind of a jerk, but...)
rlenavampyre14 - This fic is what I'd call 'hodgepodge,' overall. It started out pretty angsty (which always baffles me, I never thought I could write angst that well) and the romance shows up every now and then... spruce it up with some humor... once I get into the dueling bits, we'll have a rounded Yu-Gi-Oh fic! Believe you me, there'll be a bit of everything in here-- so I hope it suits your every mood! I hope you keep reading!
Jellybob 15 - Jellybob, now available in grape! *giggles* Sorry, couldn't help myself. Those who read Shounen Jump will get that cheesy joke, but otherwise, pay it no mind, I'm a crazy writer. I'm really glad you liked the fic, and hope this latest installment met with your satisfaction! Thank you so much for the compliments, they really encourage me to keep going! ^_^ *bows* Hehe, and if you think there's a lot going on now... *whistles* I've slated this fic to be something like 36 chapters, and that's NOT including the sequel. We're in for one heck of a ride!
Chaos Valkyrie - Hello to one of the first five BEA members! Firstly, thank you very much for your uberkind review-- I work very hard to keep the characters in-character (well, as much as possible, anyway) and keep their interactions as believable as... well, as believable as Yu-Gi-Oh. This chapter might have sent the previous chapters off kilter some, but we all know the YGO verse is far from normal. *bows* I hope you liked this latest chapter, and will keep reading!
Emrysrei - *blushes* Thank you very much for the high praise! Though I have to tell you, Bakura's tarot reading was only the tip of the iceberg-- for this chapter! I'm not sure if I'll have him do future readings (for others?) but the plot will go on-- much longer, as I said to Jellybob 15 up there. I really do hope the fic is far from run-of-the-mill; so many fics are just carbon copies of one-another (plot-wise, anyway) that it's difficult to sort through the dirt to find the gems, you know what I mean? Oh, and as for Chieko's fiancee... hehe, he'll come in later. Much later. As you know by now, it's certainly not Noah... *grins*
Pink and White Snow - O_O 2h:35m:40s ...? Geez, and *I'm* starting to think THIS chapter is long. Then again, it's not that much shorter than 7B, but that might be because of the reviews. *shrugs* I hope it doesn't suck away at your free time too much! I do hope you continue to read and review, in any case-- hoped you liked this chappie!
crytadon - This chapter was SOOO hard to write, hence the long wait. Also, I have work, annoying college applications, and I was trying to get BEA up. But now most of that is said and done (except for the work part, *sigh*) so... WDKY TIME! Anyway, thanks for the compliment, and I hope you keep reading and reviewing!
Angel of Midnight Darkness - ^^; I remember when I used to try and print fics out and read them off-line... what a pain! I abused so many printers... Sorry you couldn't print it out, anyhow. I know the chapters are long. Well, if worse comes to worse, you CAN download them off my site and read them off-line on your computer? I hope the fic keeps going on your "better and better" track, and that you liked this latest chapter!
AG the Master - Hey, thanks for the compliments! If my calculations are correct, you should be seeing an official "get-together" of Téa and Kaiba in.... Oops, wait, classified information. :) Keep reading and you'll see!
Mokuba's Official Glomper - Mokuba is the cutest guy EVER! Well, in the anime, anyway. Even when he's trying so hard to be like Seto (i.e. a prick) he's tooo adorable! No wonder why Téa thanked him and not Seto when Seto saved her life. *snickers* What was it someone said-- like thanking the postman that handed you a million dollar check, instead of the guy that sent it to you? Like that. *smirk* I hope you've liked thus far and will keep reading-- Mokuba's spotlight is on in Chapter 12.
Michelle - ^_^ Thanks for the email review! FFnet has been having upgrade situations lately, hence the not-being-able to review, but thanks for taking the time to tell me what you thought! I'm very flattered that you like WDKY so much... as for 'poor Yugi,' well... >_> Gee, I hope you don't hate me for the next chapter then. All I'm going to say is *coughcough*unrequitedlove*coughcough*. As for more Seto/Téa fics, more are on the way, including Part 2 of TJOY! So keep your eyes peeled for them-- check my profile, join my updates list, or keep checking the Yu-Gi-Oh section!