Nope, this is the perfect place to ask-- even if the entry this is in is a bit, er "unrelated" to betasquad. ^^;

Comments in the story are based on anything that you think is noteworthy about the story, good or bad. Authors are (at least *I* am, and I post there to get my stuff beta'd) always looking for people to point out:
* bad characterization
* confusing plot lines
* bad spelling and/or grammar
* the appearance of a Mary-Sue/Marty-Stu
* places where the narrative/dialogue is lacking

And so on. It's always nice to have some good things pointed out as well, but we're obviously not looking for flat-out reviws like "OMGZsquee! continue!" with no concrit whatsoever.

Honesty is the best policy, so if you see something lacking or confusing in a fic posted there, we ask that you point it out.